Well, that’s rich.
Coming from her.
I can’t believe.
You’d even think that.
If you were any sort of friend.
You’d cut her off.
And who the hell is she.
To tell you how we roll.
You just stick with me.
Honey.
Tales of the City: Did Grace say that, too….?
A Savage Joy 
Exactly. The cheek of that Grace! Enjoyed this.
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Haha – I know! Thanks 🙂
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neck roll and finger snap:) very nice!
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Haha! Love it 🙂 thanks also for follow
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Love the voice in this piece. Nicely done!
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Thanks Wizard 🙂
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Thank *you* glasgowdragonfly.
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I love the air you give to this piece. Amazing 🙂
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Thanks so much Soumyaa 🙂
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I love the voice in here, too! You give no detail as to who these people are but I can see them clearly. Very cool!
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Delighted you enjoyed this and could see the protagonists clearly. Thanks for commenting 🙂
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The rhythm and the voice are perfect!
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Wow, thanks so much Jennifer!
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Mean girls…
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Sure are Stacie! 🙂
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That’s how it ends usually…
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I know, very manipulative isn’t it 😉
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This piece has a lot of sass! 😉
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Thank you! I forget how many conversations like this that I have overheard in nightclub toilets over the years 🙂
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That Grace! What a b—-! This made me smile, mostly because they’re not talking about me. Is that bad? 🙂
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Hi Tina! Thanks for commenting and I’m glad that I made you smile. No, not bad atall, always fascinating to observe us women at our worst 😉
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Rich is such a versatile word. Short for Richard. Wealthy. Thick and creamy. Maybe she/he meant all of those things.
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That’s very true! Thanks for commenting and for thinking outside the box. I’m not sure that I would have given her the benefit of the doubt 🙂
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I liked the “Honey” it said all the things that Grace doesn’t.
Manipulation was used well here, you almost don’t know you’re being duped.
nice job.
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Thanks for taking the time to comment Kir. Really appreciate your feedback!
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Sounds like she is kind of pushy too. She might be better off to roll solo without the pair of them.
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Oh yes, she is pushy alright! Feel sorry for the little piggy in the middle! Thanks for commenting 🙂
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Not sure if you heard the song, but it reminds of “it ain’t nothin to cut that b***h off.” Great post.
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Alas the song didn’t make it over to Scotland. I can imagine its lyrics though! Thank you 🙂
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ha! I love it!
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Thank you 🙂
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So much to read between the lines here! Well done.
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Thanks Meg, that means a lot 🙂
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Hahaha I’d say cut and run. Honey. : ) Great voice.
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Thanks Kymm. Yeah, never trust someone who calls you honey or mate 😉
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The really good ones, I can hear in my head. Like this.
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Thanks Rowan. This kinda comment makes me v happy 🙂
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Lovely characterisation.
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Thank you Sarah Ann 🙂
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^ What Rowan said. This could be a direct quote from my friend Michelle! you don’t know her, do you?
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Hehe – I know many of hers! 🙂 thanks james
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I love the short phrases – they really help establish the speaker’s voice. And the sly manipulative tone is so well done. Great job! Thanks for linking up!
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Thanks Christine! First time gargle and really enjoyed this prompt.
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